How many hours a week should people work?

2024-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chammy

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In Korea, it is generally set to work 8 hours a day. If you work on weekends, you have to pay more at work. So, you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, you will work 40 hours a week. That\'s why the person can averagelly work 40 to 52 hours a week. But in my personal opinion, it would be better to work less hours. It would be nice to work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary, but there are no cases where you work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary. Therefore, it would be better to work within the time range set by the country.

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Chammy

In Korea, it is generally set to work 8 hours a day.
>> Correct
If you work on weekends, you have to pay more at work.
>> If you work on weekends, you have to get paid higher at work.
So, you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, you will work 40 hours a week.
Or
>> So if you work 5 days for 8 hours excluding weekends, that makes 40 hours per week. 
That\'s why the person can averagelly work 40 to 52 hours a week.
>>That is why a person could be working an average of 40 to 52 hours per week.
But in my personal opinion, it would be better to work less hours.
OR
>> However, in my opinion, working fewer hours is preferable. 
It would be nice to work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary, but there are no cases where you work a small amount of time and get a lot of salary.
OR
>> It would be ideal to work for a short period of time and earn high pay, but there are no such examples.
Therefore, it would be better to work within the time range set by the country.
>> Correct

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