How many languages do you know? Would you like to learn more?
학생이 쓴 원문
Two languages that I know are Korean and English. And I\'d like to learn other languages as French and German. You know, the reason that I want to learn French is when I go to bu[이름]ess trip to France, I think it needs to communicate well with them for the maintenance of aircraft. And another one, Germany has developed technology and science. So small and medium-sized bu[이름]ess can be grown up by now. That\'s why I want to learn German, if I have a chance to go there, I wanna see their things. :)
강사 첨삭
Fantastic Tuesday to you, Elic! Coming together is a beginning; keeping together is progress; working together is success. Don’t limit yourself, success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day-in and day-out.
Two languages that I know are Korean and English.
>>> The two languages that I know are Korean and English.
And I\'d like to learn other languages as French and German.
>>> And I\'d like to learn other languages, such as French and German.
You know, the reason that I want to learn French is when I go to bu[이름]ess trip to France, I think it needs to communicate well with them for the maintenance of aircraft.
>>> You know, the reason that I want to learn French is because when I go on a bu[이름]ess trip to France, I think I need to communicate well with them for the maintenance of aircraft.
And another one, Germany has developed technology and science.
>>> And another one, Germany, has developed technology and science.
So small and medium-sized bu[이름]ess can be grown up by now. That\'s why I want to learn German, if I have a chance to go there, I wanna see their things.
>>> So small and medium-sized bu[이름]esses can grow up by now. That\'s why I want to learn German; if I have a chance to go there, I want to see their things.
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