How many people do you know who work in the profession of their choice?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe there are few people who are working on what they like. Most people work regardless of their preference because they have to make a living. It is a blessing thing if you have a job that you like. According to just-released data by Gallup, only 13 percent of employees are "engaged" in their jobs, or emotionally invested in their work and focused on helping their organizations improve. It means that only 13 percent of people worldwide actually like going to work. The US and Canada actually have the highest engagement rate in the world, with 29 percent of workers. Working conditions in countries or regions such as China (6 percent engagement), East Asia (also 6 percent) and South Asia (10 percent) make their low worker satisfaction levels not all that surprising. The thing is that once your hobby becomes your job, you will get sick of doing it 24/7. A job means that you have to do regardless of your feelings, choices, or will. You have to follow an order from your company.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Finally, we surpassed the first day of the week.
How do you feel today?
Regarding the topic of your essay, do you love your job?
What motivates you to go to work everyday?
In my case, I really love my job.
I love my students and the things that I do at work.
I can say that I am blessed. ^^
I hope you are also enjoying the things that you do at work.
Thank you so much for your effort.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I believe there are few people who are working on what they like.
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Most people work regardless of their preference because they have to make a living.
>> correct
It is a blessing thing if you have a job that you like.
>> correct
According to just-released data by Gallup, only 13 percent of employees are \"engaged\" in their jobs, or emotionally invested in their work and focused on helping their organizations improve.
>> correct
It means that only 13 percent of people worldwide actually like going to work.
>> correct
The US and Canada actually have the highest engagement rate in the world, with 29 percent of workers.
>> correct
Working conditions in countries or regions such as China (6 percent engagement), East Asia (also 6 percent) and South Asia (10 percent) make their low worker satisfaction levels not all that surprising.
>> correct
The thing is that once your hobby becomes your job, you will get sick of doing it 24/7.
>> correct
A job means that you have to do regardless of your feelings, choices, or will.
>> correct
You have to follow an order from your company.
>> correct
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