How many seasons are there in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Korea has four seasons.
But I don\'t like having four seasons because we have to have so many things each season.
For example, clothes, shoes, sun cream, weather coat, snow tires and so many seasonal items .
We have to spend big money and time whenever the season change.
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How many seasons are there in your country?
Korea has four seasons.CORRECT!
or>>There are four kinds of seasons here in Korea.
But I don\'t like having four seasons because we have to have so many things each season.
But I don\'t like having four seasons because we have to have so many things each season.
>>But I don\'t like having four seasons because we have to buy so many things for each season.
For example, clothes, shoes, sun cream, weather coat, snow tires and so many seasonal items.
For example, clothes, shoes, sun cream, weather coat, snow tires and so many seasonal items.
>>For example, we have to buy new clothes, new shoes, get a different coat, some sun cream, snow tires and so many seasonal items.
We have to spend big money and time whenever the season change.
>>We have to spend a huge amount of money and time whenever the season changes.
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