How much are you willing to spend for a trip, maximum amount?

2019-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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When I went on a trip alone, I usally spent from 200 dollars to 300dollars, include acommodation. Of course, only within the my country. But after marriage, we started to go on a trip abroad. Ordinary people enjoy self guided tour but we want package tour. Because I think the package tour\'s cost is more cheaper. When we go on a trip, we book include national holiday. So it costs a lot. We spend 1 millions won a person. So I save for a trip from new year, every months.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. Going on a trip would really make you spend.

- T. Beth
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When I went on a trip alone, I usally spent from 200 dollars to 300dollars, include acommodation.

>>> When I went on a trip alone, I usually spent from 200 dollars to 300 dollars, including accommodation.

Of course, only within the my country.

>>> OR: Of course, only for domestic trips.
But after marriage, we started to go on a trip abroad.

>>> correct
Ordinary people enjoy self guided tour but we want package tour.

>>> correct
Because I think the package tour\'s cost is more cheaper.

>>> OR: Because I think package tours are much cheaper.
When we go on a trip, we book include national holiday.

>>> OR: When we go on a trip, we book including national holidays.

So it costs a lot.

>>> correct

We spend 1 millions won a person.

>>> We spend 1 million won a person.

So I save for a trip from new year, every months.

>>> So I save for a trip starting new year, every month.

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