How much attention do you pay to fashion in the way you dress?
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I prefer wearing neat clothes to wearing fancy clothes.
So I usually buy some basic fashion items with good qualities rather than trendy items.
Especially when I am at the work, I prefer wearing comfortable clothes and rarely pay attention to fashion.
In the past, I had a big interest in getting diverse, trendy items but it costs a lot of money and effort to have and manage them.
So these days I have been trying to seek a minimalism in the fashion.
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I prefer wearing neat clothes to wearing fancy clothes.
>>> CORRECT =)
So I usually buy some basic fashion items with good qualities rather than trendy items.
>>> CORRECT =)
Especially when I am at the work, I prefer wearing comfortable clothes and rarely pay attention to fashion.
>>> Especially when I am at work, I prefer wearing comfortable clothes and rarely pay attention to fashion.
In the past, I had a big interest in getting diverse, trendy items but it costs a lot of money and effort to have and manage them.
>>> CORRECT =)
So these days I have been trying to seek a minimalism in the fashion.
>>> So these days I have been trying to seek minimalism in fashion.
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