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I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don\'t care what I were every day since I got married. I used to go shopping a lot, when I was a high school student. Sadly, my hometown was in countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shop. I used to go Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn\'t have enough money. I don\'t remember my monthly allowance, mayby it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends. Even though, It takes an hour to get there by a train, I really love to go shopping. Howeve, I like uniform because I don\'t have to think what I wear every morning. I think fashion models are the most stylish people in the world. They have amazing body shape, so it looks gorgeous whatever they wear. I heard that fashionable people don\'t like buying brand clothes and expensive ones, they prefer to purchase things that match with their items such as shoes, accessaries, and so on.
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I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don\'t care what I were every day since I got married.
>> I was interested in fashion a lot before, but I don\'t care what I wear every day since I got married.
I used to go shopping a lot, when I was a high school student.
>> CORRECT!Sadly, my hometown was in countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shop.
>> Sadly, my hometown was in the countryside, so it was difficult to find a nice shop.
OR >> Sadly, my hometown was in the countryside, so it was difficult to find nice shops.
I used to go Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn\'t have enough money.
>> I used to go to Seoul to get clothes in a brand shops althouth I didn\'t have enough money.
I don\'t remember my monthly allowance, mayby it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends.
>> I don\'t remember how much my monthly allowance was, maybe it was a small amount of money, but I used to save it for a long time and went shopping with my friends.
Even though, It takes an hour to get there by a train, I really love to go shopping.
>> CORRECT!Even though, It takes an hour to get there by a train, I really love to go shopping.
Howeve, I like uniform because I don\'t have to think what I wear every morning.
>> However, I like wearing uniforms because I don\'t have to think about what I should wear every morning.
I think fashion models are the most stylish people in the world.
>> CORRECT!They have amazing body shape, so it looks gorgeous whatever they wear.
>> CORRECT!I heard that fashionable people don\'t like buying brand clothes and expensive ones, they prefer to purchase things that match with their items such as shoes, accessaries, and so on.
>> CORRECT!
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