How much do you think your job defines who you are as a person?
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I think my job defines who I am. People devote themselves to their jobs, spend a lot of time on them, and study for their jobs.
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Happy Tuesday, [이름]!
I completely understand your perspective! Our jobs often shape our identities and reflect our passions. It\'s impressive how much dedication people put into their work; from the time they invest to the knowledge they gain.
~Kelly^^
I think my job defines who I am. >> Correct
OR:
>> I believe my job plays a big role in defining who I am.
People devote themselves to their jobs, spend a lot of time on them, and study for their jobs.
>> Correct
OR:
>> People devote themselves to their jobs, spend a lot of time on them, and continuously learn for their careers.
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