How much do you "trust" the weather forecast? How often is it wrong?
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Good afternoon and happy Friday, Sir [이름]!
Good for you! I am glad that the weather forecast in Korea is quite accurate.
It is because the people will be able to prepare.
In some instances, the weather forecast in the Philippine is sometimes accurate, too.
However, when we it is about typhoons.
The information is not that updated so there are some casualties.
I guess we can talk about this in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina
The weather forecast is quite accurate in Korea, although it wasn’t in the past.
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A decade ago, the Korea Meteorological Administration has been severely criticized by the public for its incompetency in providing accurate information.
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It has often failed to issue a warning beforehand for a sudden massive downpour so that it has caused significant personal casualties and property damages.
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The state-run agency has invested a lot recently in upgrading the weather radar network, hiring experts, and buying a supercomputer to enhance its forecast accuracy.
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While the agency has been recently praised for correctly predicting rain-or-shine days, its forecast on the amount of rainfall has been poor.
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Some experts say that forecasting in Korea is much harder than in the US because there are three oceans, seashores, hills at every ear and a demanding public.
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But the weather has too many dividends.
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With a slight shift of wind, which heavily affects rain, it could change so much.
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