How much do you value your privacy?

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The privacy is protected by the law.

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This showed us that it is one of the most important things which must be protected by the law. 

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I think all people have experienced the leakage of personal information that can be used on the crime.

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This can cause personal bankruptcy.

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So, I would like to ask people who are not considering their personal information carefully, why they don\'t be careful to create new password and to change it frequently.

>>> So, I would like to ask people who are not considering their personal information carefully, why are they not careful to create new password and to change it frequently.

Especially, criminals can do everything, if they have resident registration number and it\'s really easy to get from online website.

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Criminals can make credit card, make a house rental contract with an owner and withdraw money.

>>> Criminals can make fake credit cards, make a house rental contract with an owner and withdraw money.

That\'s why a lot of people send text message to anonymous people for fraud.

>>> That\'s why a lot of people send text messages to anonymous people to fraud.

The importance of protecting privacy cannot be emphasized enough.

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