How much does the media cover crime in your country? Do you think that they should spend less time o

Hello Sir [이름]!

Good afternoon! Are you having a wonderful day?

I am blessed to have a diligent student like you.

You always make time to do your essays in order to share your opinions and improve your writing skill too.

I totally agree with your ideas that there are times the news are already exaggerated.

I think it is a way for the media to open the eyes of people about some incidents.

Maybe to make the people aware about something or to be careful everyday.

I am excited to talk to you in class.

Teacher Nina

Korea is a so dynamic country.

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>> Korea is really a dynamic country.

Even a day does not go by without any controversial issues or striking news.

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>> A day won\'t go by without any controversial issues or striking news.

Whenever you turn on your TV or open a newspaper, they are full of shocking stories everyday.

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It is somewhat true that big incidents happen so often in Korea, however, the Korean media is too much keen on making a buzz to draw publics’ attention.

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It is understandable that they have to compete fiercely to survive, however, they sometimes go too far.

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They often give in to so called yellow journalism.

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They report with little or no legitimate well-researched news and instead use eye-catching headlines to sell more commercials or newspapers.

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Such techniques may include exaggerations of news events, scandal-mongering, or sensationalism.

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Some reporters treat news in an unprofessional or unethical fashion.

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The Korean media reports even a trivial incident such as a small fire and a light car accident.

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Korean people are also sensitive to a small incident and don\'t like to stay calm.

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