How much does the weekend mean to you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Weekend is delight of my life. I feel relieved when i lie down on my bed watching youtube with my phone. Sometimes i like to go outside and walk around when the weather is nice. I make appointment with my friends because it is not easy to meet them on weekdays. I sometimes eat out with my family. But I feel sad when sunday evening come close. That is the only problem of weekends.
강사 첨삭
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>> Weekend adds delight to my life.
I feel relieved when i lie down on my bed watching youtube with my phone.
>> I feel relieved when I lie down on my bed and watch youtube on my phone.
>> I feel relieved when I lie down on my bed and watch youtube on my phone.
Sometimes i like to go outside and walk around when the weather is nice.
>> Sometimes, I like to go outside and walk around when the weather is nice.
I make appointment with my friends because it is not easy to meet them on weekdays.
>> Correct
I sometimes eat out with my family.
>> Correct
But I feel sad when sunday evening come close.
>> But I feel sad when Sunday evening gets close.
That is the only problem of weekends.
>> That is the only problem every weekends.
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