How much empathy do yo feel toword other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I think your question is difficult to answer.
I thought I had a lesson about english, but your home work is a deep composition including human emotion.
What is your major in University? Philosophy?
As far as I know, normal thinking give a sympathy to someone. But negative thinking is not. Negative make another negative. Some people can agree to it, but most people don\'t agree to it, because human like a positive mind. If I talk to someone, he give a positive thinking to me, maybe I like him. Because of a sympathy of thinking.
I sure you had a friends, but if you don\'t have sympathy with them, it is impossible to maintain as a friend between you and your friends.
I think, sympathy is very important point to others.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I think your question is difficult to answer.
>> CORRECT!
I thought I had a lesson about english, but your home work is a deep composition including human emotion.
>> I thought I had a lesson about English, but your homework is a deep composition including human emotion.
What is your major in University? Philosophy?
>> CORRECT!
As far as I know, normal thinking give a sympathy to someone.
>> As far as I know, normal thinking gives a sympathy to someone.
But negative thinking is not. Negative make another negative.
>> But negative thinking doesn\'t. Negative thinking attracts negativity.
Some people can agree to it, but most people don\'t agree to it, because human like a positive mind.
>> Some people can agree to it, but most people don\'t agree with it, because humans like to have positive mind.
If I talk to someone, he give a positive thinking to me, maybe I like him. Because of a sympathy of thinking.
>> If I talk to someone, he gives me positive thinking about him, maybe I like him. Because of the sympathy of thinking.
I sure you had a friends, but if you don\'t have sympathy with them, it is impossible to maintain as a friend between you and your friends.
>> I\'m sure you have friends, but if you don\'t sympathize with them, it is impossible to maintain a good friendship between you and your friends.
I think, sympathy is very important point to others.
>> I think, sympathy is very important to point out to others.
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