How much free time do you have for yourself? Do you like to spend your free time alone or in a compa
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Well, do you mean the free time is to take a rest whole day? Then I have my free time that is to take a rest whole day just 1time a week. Because I have two part time jobs. One is assistance of banker and another is to work at a cafe. So, my free time is very precious for me. And I like to spend my free time alone. Usually I watch the movies on Netflix. These day I started watching the QUEENSS GAMBIT. It is very awsome. I recommend you totally. Also I like reading the books. Especially I read fiction books. that\'s it. sometimes I think now what I\'m doing is very simple and not funny...:( So someday I will upgrade my hobby. If you don\'t mind, could you recommend hobbies for me? Thank you for reading my writing.
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Hey, [이름]. You actually did your homework :) I appreciate it and thank you for taking the time to write a long one. I think you are doing well and your hobbies are not boring. It is a good start so you should give yourself some credit. Let\'s talk about it tomorrow. See you in class. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Well, do you mean the free time is to take a rest whole day?
>> Well, when you say \"free time,\" do you mean take the rest for the whole day?
Then I have my free time that is to take a rest whole day just 1time a week.
>> When I have free time I take the whole day to take a rest one time a week.
Because I have two part time jobs.
>> Because I have two part-time jobs.
One is assistance of banker and another is to work at a cafe.
>> One as banker assistant and another is work at a cafe.
So, my free time is very precious for me.
>> So, my free time is very precious to me.
And I like to spend my free time alone.
>> CORRECT =)
Usually I watch the movies on Netflix.
>> Usually, I watch the movies on Netflix.
These day I started watching the QUEENSS GAMBIT.
>> These days I started watching the Queen\'s Gambit.
It is very awsome.
>> It is very awesome.
I recommend you totally.
>> I recommend it to you totally.
Also I like reading the books.
>> Also, I like reading books.
Especially I read fiction books.
>> Especially I read fiction books.
that\'s it.
>> That is it.
sometimes I think now what I\'m doing is very simple and not funny...:(
>> Sometimes I think what I am doing is very simple and not fun.
So someday I will upgrade my hobby.
>> CORRECT =)
If you don\'t mind, could you recommend hobbies for me?
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: If you do not mind, could you recommend hobbies for me?
Thank you for reading my writing.
>> CORRECT =)
>> OR: Thank you for reading my essay.
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