How much free time do you usually have?
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These days I have very much free time.
>> These days I have a lot of free time.
Because I just graduated my University last week, and I will go to Malaysia for my job next month.
>> I just recently graduated from the University. I am also going to Malaysia next month for my new job.
So these days I usually take a break in the house. Or, I study English at cafeteria.
>> I am just spending most of my time these days taking a break and staying in my house most of the time. Or, I study English in the cafeteria.
In the morning, I oversleep. During study at the University, I couldn\'t sleep well.
>> I have the pleasure now of getting more sleep because when I was still in the University, I was deprived of sleep.
So, I\'m very happy that I can sleep long time.
>> Now, I am very happy because I can sleep a lot.
And then, in the afternoon, I go to a computer academy for study computer certification.
>> In the afternoon I usually go to a computer academy to study and get a certificate.
Actually I don\'t need to get the certification but, I already passed written test. So, I just want to pass practical test also.
>> I don\'t actually need the certification because I already passed the written test. I just want to pass the practical test also.
the computer lecture, all time is free time. So, I go to a cafe or restaurant wherever I want.
>> Once I am done with my computer class/study, I usually have free time the rest of the afternoon. Either I go to a café or restaurant to spend my time.
After I go to the University, I couldn\'t stay with my family long time. Now a days I spend much time with my family. So, I\'m very happy.
>> When I was still in the University, I was not able to spend more time with my family. But nowadays I can spend so much time with them already. That makes me really happy.
Consequentially, I have much free time these days, and I spend it very happily.
>> Consequentially, I have a lot of free time these days and I make sure that I spend it happily.
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