How much free time do you usually have?

2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Stacy

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These days I have very much free time. Because I just graduated my University last week, and I will go to Malaysia for my job next month. So these days I usually take a break in the house. Or, I study English at cafeteria. In the morning, I oversleep. During study at the University, I couldn't sleep well. So, I'm very happy that I can sleep long time. And then, in the afternoon, I go to a computer academy for study computer certification. Actually I don't need to get the certification but, I already passed written test. So, I just want to pass practical test also. After the computer lecture, all time is free time. So, I go to a cafe or restaurant wherever I want. After I go to the University, I couldn't stay with my family long time. Now a days I spend much time with my family. So, I'm very happy. Consequentially, I have much free time these days, and I spend it very happily.

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These days I have very much free time.

>> These days I have a lot of free time.


Because I just graduated my University last week, and I will go to Malaysia for my job next month.

>> I just recently graduated from the University. I am also going to Malaysia next month for my new job.


So these days I usually take a break in the house. Or, I study English at cafeteria.

>>  I am just spending most of my time these days taking a break and staying in my house most of the time. Or, I study English in the cafeteria.


In the morning, I oversleep. During study at the University, I couldn\'t sleep well.

>> I have the pleasure now of getting more sleep because when I was still in the University, I was deprived of sleep.


So, I\'m very happy that I can sleep long time.

>> Now, I am very happy because I can sleep a lot.


And then, in the afternoon, I go to a computer academy for study computer certification.

>> In the afternoon I usually go to a computer academy to study and get a certificate.


Actually I don\'t need to get the certification but, I already passed written test. So, I just want to pass practical test also.

>>  I don\'t actually need the certification because I already passed the written test.  I just want to pass the practical test also.
 

the computer lecture, all time is free time. So, I go to a cafe or restaurant wherever I want.

>>  Once I am done with my computer class/study, I usually have free time the rest of the afternoon. Either I go to a café or restaurant to spend my time.


After I go to the University, I couldn\'t stay with my family long time. Now a days I spend much time with my family. So, I\'m very happy.

>> When I was still in the University, I was not able to spend more time with my family. But nowadays I can spend so much time with them already. That makes me really happy.


Consequentially, I have much free time these days, and I spend it very happily.

>> Consequentially, I have a lot of free time these days and I make sure that I spend it happily.




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