How much free time do you usually have? What do you like to do in your free time? Do you prefer to r

2022-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I usually have 3 to 4 hours free time. I like to do my phone and watching funny videos on the YouTube or chat with my friends. And I prefer to relax. Because I am not active and I don\'t like very active person. So I prefer to be relax.

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Hello, [이름] U! ^^
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~ Teacher Tricia


I usually have 3 to 4 hours free time. 
>>> I usually have 3 to 4 hours of free time. 

I like to do my phone and watching funny videos on the YouTube or chat with my friends. 
>>> I like to do my phone and watch funny videos on YouTube or chat with my friends. 

And I prefer to relax. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because I am not active and I don\'t like very active person. 
>>> Because I am not active and I don\'t like very active people. 

So I prefer to be relax.
>>> So I prefer to be relaxed.

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