How much has my neighborhood changed over the years?
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Our neighborhood have changed many times while I live in here about 20years.
Bus terminal, theater, shopping center and big supermarkets were builted in our neighborhood. These made our live more convenient.
But high rise apartments built sevral years ago invaded our right of view. Because these apartments are so high that we cannot see the sun well. That is worse.
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Our neighborhood have changed many times while I live in here about 20years.
>>> Our neighborhood has changed a lot while I lived here for about twenty years.
OR >>> Our neighborhood has gone through many changes over the past twenty years.
Bus terminal, theater, shopping center and big supermarkets were builted in our neighborhood.
>>> Bus terminals, theaters, shopping centers, and big supermarkets were built in our neighborhood.
These made our live more convenient.
>>> These made our lives more convenient.
But high rise apartments built sevral years ago invaded our right of view.
>>> But high-rise apartments built several years ago invaded our right to a view.
Because these apartments are so high that we cannot see the sun well.
>>> Because these apartments are so tall, we cannot see the sun well.
OR >>> These apartments are so tall that we cannot see the sun well.
That is worse.
>>> That is the worst.
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