How much is the most expensive food you ever bought? What was it?

2019-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I haven\'t tried such expensive food. I haven\'t bought also. A few years ago, when we are dating I had eaten Lobster. The price was 100dollars or more. The price was expensive but the tasty was not good. The tasty was a little oily. One years ago, we went a luxurious resort with my husband\'s family. There we ate lamb. The smell wass not good and the price was so expensive,too. I think, go to supermarket and cooking at home is very wisenary.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you once again for this. I guess expensive food are not always worth the price then. 
- T. Beth
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I haven\'t tried such expensive food.
>>> correct      
I haven\'t bought also. 
>>>  correct     
A few years ago, when we are dating I had eaten Lobster. 
>>> A few years ago, when we were dating, I had eaten lobster. 
The price was 100 dollars or more. 
>>> correct
The price was expensive but the ta
sty was not good.
>>> The price was expensive but the taste was not so good.
>>> It was expensive but it didn\'t really taste good.
The tasty was a little oily. 
>>> It tasted a bit oily.
One years ago, we went a luxurious resort with my husband\'s family. 
>>> One year ago, we went to a luxurious resort with my husband\'s family. 
>>> OR: A year ago, My husband\'s family and I went to a luxurious resort.
There we ate lamb. 
>>> correct ( There, we ate lamb. )
>>> OR: We ate lamb there.
The smell wass not good and the price was so expensive,too.
>>> The smell was not good and the price was also so expensive.
>>> OR: It didn\'t smell appetizing and the price was also expensive.
I think, go to supermarket and cooking at home is very wisenary.
>>> I think, going to the supermarket and cooking at home is much wiser.

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