How much money is enough for you? How important is water for people?
학생이 쓴 원문
How much money is enough for you?
Money is make people lauht or cry.
Then rich person is every day so happy?
I Think not well. Because their should be costs.
Even so I am not rich person , but I am so happy now.
Have a harmonious family ,and no beggar.
How important is water for people?
Water is our most important it.
We can\'t live wihtout water.
If none water,
Person is tired, feel giddy , have indigestion , .
be constipated ,not sleep.. etc.
So , we are can\'t do anything.
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Good morning [이름] [이름]!
~Lucy
Money is make people lauht or cry.
>>Money makes people laugh or cry.
Then rich person is every day so happy?
Then rich person is every day so happy?
>>Then, rich people are every day happy, right?
I Think not well.
I Think not well.
>>I think it\'s not well.
Because their should be costs.
>>CORRECT!
Even so I am not rich person , but I am so happy now.
Even so I am not rich person , but I am so happy now.
>>CORRECT!
Have a harmonious family ,and no beggar.
Have a harmonious family ,and no beggar.
>>CORRECT!
Water is our most important it.
Water is our most important it.
>>Water is the most important to us.
We can\'t live wihtout water.
>>We can\'t live without water.
If none water, Person is tired, feel giddy , have indigestion , .
If none water, Person is tired, feel giddy , have indigestion , .
>>If there\'s no water, people are tired, feel giddy and have indigestion , .
be constipated ,not sleep.. etc.
be constipated ,not sleep.. etc.
>>Be constipated and couldn\'t sleep.. etc.
So , we are can\'t do anything.
So , we are can\'t do anything.
>>So , we can\'t do anything.
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