How much money is enough for you to live?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your lesson.
I think more money is better.
When I was alone, a little money is enough. But I married and I knew to need more money to live.
For my child, my parents, parents in law an so on.
During 20 years, I earned money with my job. So I am enough now. But I think, I need more money anyway.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It was nice talking to you today. Enjoy the rest of the day ^^
Thank you for your lesson.
>> CORRECT
I think more money is better.
>> CORRECT
When I was alone, a little money is enough. But I married and I knew to need more money to live for my child, my parents, parents in law an so on.
>> When I was alone, a little money is enough but when I got married, I knew I needed more money to live for my child, my parents and my parents in law and people who are important to me.
During 20 years, I earned money with my job. So I am enough now. But I think, I need more money anyway.
>> For 20 years, I earned money because of my job. So It is enough now but I think I need more money.
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