How much of a problem is obesity in your country?
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On the contrary this question, we worry about under weights.
>>Contrary to this question, we worry about underweight.
Especailly Young koreans think that theirs weight is over compare with standards.
>>Especially, young Koreans think that they are overweight compared to the standard weight.
Because They want to resemble celebrities apparence.
>>Because they want to resemble celebrity\'s appearances.
So It cause the serious problem thesedays.
>>So it causes a serious problem these days.
The expert surveyed that \"How think your weight?\" ,
>>An expert surveyed about, \"What do you think about your weight?\" ,
Most partispants are choosing I`m just over weights\" but the expert tell that they are normal.
>>Most participants chose that they are overweight, but the expert told them that they are normal.
I Just think that they always affect stars, So they tried to diet.
>>I just think that they are affected by the stars so they do diet.
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