How much spend time for doing my hair
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend about 15 minutes doing my hair in the morning.
I have to put water on my fringe.
Also, I do hair straightner every morning.
It\'s because I have malignant curls on my fringe.
It is really stress for me.
I am so tired because of that.
Sometimes, when I can\'t hair straightner because I am busy, I have a bad hair.
Therefore hair straightner is precious for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This is good for the middle of the week.
I can see the effort that went into this work.
I hope you can maintain this level of excellence throughout the week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend about 15 minutes doing my hair in the morning.
>> Correct
I have to put water on my fringe.
I have to put water on my fringe.
>> Correct
Also, I do hair straightner every morning.
Also, I do hair straightner every morning.
>> Also, I use a hair straightener every morning.
It\'s because I have malignant curls on my fringe.
It\'s because I have malignant curls on my fringe.
>> Correct
It is really stress for me.
It is really stress for me.
>> It is really stressful for me.
I am so tired because of that.
I am so tired because of that.
>> Correct
Sometimes, when I can\'t hair straightner because I am busy, I have a bad hair.
Sometimes, when I can\'t hair straightner because I am busy, I have a bad hair.
>> Sometimes, when I can\'t use a hair straightener because I am busy, I have a bad hair day.
Therefore hair straightner is precious for me.
Therefore hair straightner is precious for me.
>> Therefore, hair straightener is precious for me.
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