How much time do you spend outdoors every week?
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I spend time with friends about once a week. On days when I meet friends, I go out almost all day.
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I spend time with friends about once a week. On days when I meet friends, I go out almost all day.
>> I spend time with friends about once a week. On those days, I’m usually out almost all day.
OR >> I spend time with friends roughly once a week, and when we meet, I’m often out for most of the day.
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