How much time do you spend outdoors every week?
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend time outdoors only commuting time.
It\'s about three hours for a day.
Sometimes I go to the outdoor on weekend to enjoy.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I spend time outdoors only commuting time. It\'s about three hours for a day.
>> I spend time outdoors only when commuting, which takes about three hours a day.
Sometimes I go to the outdoor on weekend to enjoy.
>> Sometimes, I go outdoors on weekends to enjoy myself.
>> I spend time outdoors only when commuting, which takes about three hours a day.
Sometimes I go to the outdoor on weekend to enjoy.
>> Sometimes, I go outdoors on weekends to enjoy myself.
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