How much time should be spent on making yourself look better each day? What do you usually do?
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I like to tell you about making me look better every single day.
>> I like to tell you about how I make myself look better every single day.
First of all, I usually go to a fitness center in order to workouts to stay healthy.
>> First of all, I usually go to a fitness center in order to do my workout and stay healthy.
The fitness center is located inside my company.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: The fitness center is located in my office building.
So, I go there whenever I have a time after I finished my assignment for work.
>> So, I go there whenever I have the time after finishing my work assignment.
When I go there, I typically do running on the treadmill machin about one and half hours till sweaty a lot.
>> I usually use the treadmill for an hour and a half or until I seat a lot.
You know, it makes me feel better and get rid of my stress after running.
>> You know, it makes me feel better and it helps me get rid of my stress.
>> OR: Running makes me feel better and it helps me get rid of my stress.
It help me to stay mental health as well.
>> It strengthens my mental health.
>> OR: It helps me stay mentally healthy.
Another thing is studying speak English for improve to speaking ability.
>> I also study English to improve my speaking skills.
>> OR: I also study English to improve my speaking ability.
As you know, I always study English with you and also self-study alone whenever I have a time on the weekend.
>> As you know, I always study with you and I also self-study whenever I have the time on the weekend.
>> OR: As you know, I always study with you and I also study alone whenever I have the time on the weekend.
I really want to speaking English very well like local people as well as you.
>> I really want to speak fluent English like the Native speakers
If I speak English absolutely well like you, I will have to a chance to work in overseas branches.
>> If I speak English well, I will have the chance to work in out branches overseas.
That\'s about it.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: That\'s it.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT
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