How much time should someone spend on his/her hobby? Please answer in complete sentences.

My sister spend 2 hour on hobby. because my sister study about university so she need to study hard.

 

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HOMEWORK:

How much time should someone spend on his/her hobby? Please answer in complete sentences. 

 

YOUR ANSWER:

My sister spend 2 hour on hobby. because my sister study about university so she need to study hard.

 

CORRECTIONS:

My sister spends two hours on her hobby. That is because my sister studies in the university, so she needs to study hard.

 

 

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