How much walking do you do every day? What useful things could you do while you are walking?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually walk for six thousand steps for a day.
I sometimes check my walk steps via a smart phone.
I walk to go to the work not as a exercise.
I usually listen to the music or radio when I walked.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your ideas about walking. Your effort is very much appreciated! Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I usually walk for six thousand steps for a day.
>> I usually walk six thousand steps a day.
I sometimes check my walk steps via a smart phone.
>> I sometimes check my step count using a smartphone.
I walk to go to the work not as a exercise.
>> I walk to work, not as exercise.
I usually listen to the music or radio when I walked.
>> I usually listen to music or the radio while walking.
>> I usually walk six thousand steps a day.
I sometimes check my walk steps via a smart phone.
>> I sometimes check my step count using a smartphone.
I walk to go to the work not as a exercise.
>> I walk to work, not as exercise.
I usually listen to the music or radio when I walked.
>> I usually listen to music or the radio while walking.
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