“How My Daily Routine Reflects My Personal Growth”
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I always emphasize to my family and friends that time management is important for personal growth.
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When we wake up in the morning, we think about what we\'re going to do in bed today.
>> When we wake up in the morning, we think about what we\'re going to do for the day.
And when we sleep, we think about what I did in bed today.
>> And before we sleep, we think about what we accomplished during the day.
I don\'t remember what I did when I went to bed and I don\'t even think about what to do when I wake up in the morning.
>> I don\'t remember what I accomplished before going to bed, and I don\'t plan what to do when I wake up in the morning.
Just doing my work mechanically.
>> I just do my work mechanically.
I always put my cell phone, car keys, or wallet in my place.
>> I always put my cell phone, car keys, and wallet in their designated place.
My wife always spends a lot of time searching for her cell phone or keys, looking through her clothes and her bags.
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My wife talks to me sometimes.
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Honey, call me. I can’t find a cell phone.
>> Honey, can you call my phone? I can’t find it.
If I don\'t set it up on a plan, I only do what I like.
>> If I don\'t follow a plan, I end up doing only what I like.
However, if I set my daily routine, I can keep myself from missing what I have to do even if I don\'t want to do it.
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A person can’t grow only by doing what he or she wants to do.
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When I do what I have to do, I will find myself growing up without knowing.
>> When I do what I have to do, I find myself growing without even realizing it.
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