How necessary is internet in this modern time?
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I still use limited internet service on my mobile. Because it is cheaper than unlimited plan and I could use WIFI at the office.
But from Monday, according to the instruction of the team lead of information security team, Wifi service has been temporarily unavailable for getting a certification ISMS (Information Security Management System). If a company get a certification, the one could get investments easily. So it is very strict during a testing period. there were many constrains. I couldn\'t get messages from my friends. It was difficult to share files with co-worker. I and my collegues felt unconvient and realized how we relied on the internet.
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Thank you for this Miss. [Name]! Enjoy your weekend.
I still use limited internet service on my mobile. Because it is cheaper than unlimited plan and I could use WIFI at the office.
>>> I still use limited internet service on my mobile because it is cheaper than unlimited plan and I could use WIFI in the office.
But from Monday, according to the instruction of the team lead of information security team, Wifi service has been temporarily unavailable for getting a certification ISMS (Information Security Management System).
>>> But from Monday, according to the instruction of the team leader of information security team, Wifi service has been temporarily unavailable for getting a certification ISMS (Information Security Management System).
If a company get a certification, the one could get investments easily.
>>> If a company get a certification, it could get investments easily.
So it is very strict during a testing period.
>>> So it is very strict during the testing period.
There were many constrains.
>>> correct
I couldn\'t get messages from my friends.
>>> > correct
It was difficult to share files with co-worker.
>>> > correct
I and my collegues felt unconvient and realized how we relied on the internet.
>>> I and my colleagues felt inconvient and realized how we relied on the internet.
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