How nutritious is bread? What is your favorite spread to put on bread?
학생이 쓴 원문
Bread is high calories in carbohydrates.
It is a important nutrient to survive like rice,
But it need to keep the balance of nutrients such as protein,fat,minerals
I eat two times meals with rice ,or bread every day.
sometimes, I like chicken sandwich and cheese bagel.
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Bread is high calories in carbohydrates.
>> Bread is high in calories and carbohydrates.
It is a important nutrient to survive like rice,
>> It is an important nutrient that we need to survive like the nutrients we can get from rice.
But it need to keep the balance of nutrients such as protein,fat,minerals
But it need to keep the balance of nutrients such as protein,fat,minerals
>> However, we need to keep the balance of nutrients in our body such as protein, fats, minerals.
I eat two times meals with rice ,or bread every day.
I eat two times meals with rice ,or bread every day.
>> I eat two meals with rice or bread every day.
sometimes, I like chicken sandwich and cheese bagel.
sometimes, I like chicken sandwich and cheese bagel.
>> Sometimes, I like chicken sandwich and cheese bagel.
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