> How often do you buy the stuff you need? What would you do if the item you bought was not satisfac
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I usually buy daily necessities for my family by online shopping once a week. And I buy fresh food such as meat and fish anytime when I need.
I tend to buy my daughters cloth often by online shopping because they grow very fast. But some clothes don’t satisfy me. Then, I have no choice but to refund. Refund is the only way, but It need to be paid. Some Korean online shoppings offer special membership including free returun. I have to pay for the special membership but I think it is more economical. That’s why it provide more service such as free shipping and discount coupons as well as free return.
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Thank you for this Ms. [이름].
I usually buy daily necessities for my family by online shopping once a week.
>>> I usually buy daily necessities for my family through online shopping once a week.
And I buy fresh food such as meat and fish anytime when I need.
>>> And I buy fresh food such as meat and fish anytime when I need it.
I tend to buy my daughters cloth often by online shopping because they grow very fast.
I tend to buy my daughters cloth often by online shopping because they grow very fast.
>>> I tend to buy my daughters clothes often through online shopping because they grow very fast.
But, some clothes don’t satisfy me.
>>> correct
Then, I have no choice but to refund.
>>> correct
>>> OR: In this case, I have no choice but to refund (it).
Refund is the only way, but It need to be paid.
>>> Asking for a refund is the only way, but there\'s a fee to be paid.
Some Korean online shoppings offer special membership including free return.
>>> Some Korean online shopping stores offer special membership including free returns.
I have to pay for the special membership but I think it is more economical.
>>> correct
That’s why it provide more service such as free shipping and discount coupons as well as free return.
>>> That’s why it provides more service such as free shipping and discount coupons, as well as free returns.
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