How often do you eat fast food? What do you usually eat? Where?

2017-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Actually, I seldom go to fast food restaurants. because I spent almost 12hours in the office. By this reason, I can`t skip the offered lunch and dinner from the company. As soon as reaching home, I go to bed excepting mid-night meals. but, Sometimes I occur to eating hamburgers and pizza. At that time, I just visit a large store like a costco. If you visits that places, you can enable to select various fast foods which will be cooked with orders. The reason why I visit that store instead of franchise is that they not include franchise fee and brand values so, It is related to offer cheaper price than other franchise restaurants.

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Hello JM!!

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T. Jeny 


Actually, I seldom go to fast food restaurants. 

>>correct
 because I spent almost 12hours in the office.

>>correct

By this reason, I can`t skip the offered lunch and dinner from the company. 

>>correct
 As soon as reaching home, I go to bed excepting mid-night meals. 

>>As soon as I reach home, I go to bed skipping mid-night meals. 
 but, Sometimes I occur to eating hamburgers and pizza. 

>>But sometimes, I happen to eat hamburgers and pizza. 
 At that time, I just visit a large store like a costco.

>>At that time, I just visit a large store like Costco.

If you visits that places, you can enable to select various fast foods which will be cooked with orders.

>>If you visit that place, you can be able to select various fast foods which will be cooked upon ordering.
 The reason why I visit that store instead of franchise is that they not include franchise fee and brand values so, It is related to offer cheaper price than other franchise restaurants.

>>The reason why I visit that store instead of a franchise is that they don\'t include franchise fees and brand values so, it offers cheaper price than other franchise restaurants.

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