How often do you eat out? Please explain.

2019-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I eat out one time a week. I have several reataurants in my neighborhood where I enjoy my favorite dishes. These days I\'m getting bored with the same dishes. Luckily or unluckily my daughters like to order only Ddukbbokki or fried chickeden that are home delivery food. We can save a touble of searching for food and going out in a way. I don\'t like to eat out with my two daughters. Because their favorite foods ordered at restaurants are limited. What children\'s tastes those foods are! I hope they like adults\' ordering menus some day. Nowdays people are lazy to go out to eat out. They prefer ordering some delivery home food to eating out. They are satisfied with those delivery food. And also many restaurants are well prepared to deliver their menus to home.

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Hello [이름],

Thank you so much for the homework!

Have a nice morning and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

How often do you eat out? Please explain.

I eat out one time a week.

>>I eat out once a week.

I have several restaurants in my neighborhood where I enjoy my favorite dishes.

CORRECT!

or>>There are a number of restaurants around my neighborhood where I can enjoy most of my favorite dishes every now and then.

These days, I\'m getting bored with the same dishes.

CORRECT!

or>>Nowadays, it has become monotonous because there is no variety with the dishes they are serving.

Luckily or unluckily my daughters like to order only Ddukbbokki or fried chickeden that are home delivery food.

>>Luckily or unluckily, my daughters like to order only Ddukbbokki or fried chicken, which are home delivery foods.

We can save a touble of searching for food and going out in a way.

>>In a way, we can save ourselves from this kind of trouble by searching for certain foods we like before going out.

I don\'t like to eat out with my two daughters.

CORRECT!

or>>I dislike eating out with my two daughters though.

Because their favorite foods ordered at restaurants are limited.

>>Because their kind of favorite foods are very limited and cannot be found in some of the restaurants we frequent.

What children\'s tastes those foods are!

>>What strange food tastes do these children have!

I hope they like adults\' ordering menus some day.

>>I hope that someday they will come to like the dishes on the menu adults prefer to order.

Nowdays people are lazy to go out to eat out.

>>Nowadays, people are lazy to go out and eat.

or>>Nowadays, people are lazy when it comes to eating out.

They prefer ordering some delivery home food to eating out.

>>They prefer ordering home delivery foods to eating out.

They are satisfied with those delivery foods.

CORRECT!

or>>They are contented with ordering delivery foods.

And also many restaurants are well prepared to deliver their menus to home.

>>And also, many restaurants are well-prepared in delivering foods to every house.

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