How often do you have big family get-togethers? hat happens during these events?
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I have big family get_togethers 3times at one week.
We go to grandmother\'s house and play in there sometimes we watch TV.
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Hi Sunny!
Good job today!
I really admire your perseverance.
Never give up on your personal improvement.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have big family get_togethers 3times at one week.
>> The members of my family get together three times a week.
We go to grandmother\'s house and play in there sometimes we watch TV.
We go to grandmother\'s house and play in there sometimes we watch TV.
>> We go to my grandmother\'s house and play there and we also sometimes watch TV there.
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