How often do you order food delivery, and what’s your favorite meal to get?
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I don\'t order food delivery often.
There are not many days when I eat dinner at home, and there is a lot to deliver for a single meal.
However, there are days when I have dinner by delivering food.
The food I order the most at that time is jjimdak (steamed chicken).
Steamed chicken is a chicken dish with a little soup with various sauces and vegetables.
I especially like steamed chicken that are made not spicy by adding soy sauce to it, and I divide the food so that it can be eaten the next day and put it in the refrigerator.
I can have two dinners per order.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! Your response is simple and clear, with a focus on personal dining habits and your favorite dish which is jjimdak (steamed chicken). It effectively communicates your preference for food delivery and how you manage portion sizes for future meals. Thanks for sharing!
~ T. Lia
I don\'t order food delivery often.
>> CORRECT
There are not many days when I eat dinner at home, and there is a lot to deliver for a single meal.
>> There are not many days when I eat dinner at home, and ordering delivery for just one meal feels like too much.
However, there are days when I have dinner by delivering food.
>> However, there are days when I order food for dinner.
The food I order the most at that time is jjimdak (steamed chicken).
>> The food I order most often during those times is jjimdak (steamed chicken).
Steamed chicken is a chicken dish with a little soup with various sauces and vegetables.
>> Steamed chicken is a dish with a small amount of soup, various sauces, and vegetables.
I especially like steamed chicken that are made not spicy by adding soy sauce to it, and I divide the food so that it can be eaten the next day and put it in the refrigerator.
>> I especially like steamed chicken that is made non-spicy by adding soy sauce. I divide the food into portions so that I can eat it the next day and store it in the refrigerator.
I can have two dinners per order.
>> CORRECT
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