How often do you visit a convenience store? What is your favorite item to buy there?
학생이 쓴 원문
I rarely go to convenice store,I often visit at the Bus Terminal or Tain station.
I usually buy some water or snaks.
There are a lot of convinice store in Korea, we can see it anytime, anywhere.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! That\'s true! Convenience stores are everywhere. They can be found on every corner of streets and buildings. Thank you for your homework. See you tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
I rarely go to convenice store,
>>I rarely go to a convenience store.
I often visit at the Bus Terminal or Tain station.
>>I often visit one at the bus terminal or a train station.
I usually buy some water or snaks.
I usually buy some water or snaks.
>>I usually buy some water or snacks.
There are a lot of convinice store in Korea,
There are a lot of convinice store in Korea,
>>There are a lot of convenience stores in Korea.
we can see it anytime, anywhere.
>>We can see them anytime, anywhere.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.