How often should your company hold meetings?

2017-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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How often should your company hold meetings? Why is it necessary to hold company meetings? Meeting is an absolutely necessary way to communicate and share information and opinion between company's members, but it is also really difficult to manage meeting in an efficient way. My company is one of a bad case of inefficient meetings ways. I think my company has a meeting at least once a day. Each meetings goes on at least 1 hours. After 2 years working, I realize the reason that my company's way to hold meeting is inefficient. There's a clear point need to be changed. First, the purpose and expecting output of the meeting is not clear from the beginning of the meeting to the end of the meeting. In order to make meeting efficient, it is the most important point to make all participants know well about the goal of the meeting. If don't, the meeting will go to the unanticipated way. What I get to know after 2 year is that the clear, obvious goal is important for organization.

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Good day [이름] Ro!

Thank you for answering your homework, see you tomorrow. ^^

Here are my corrections for you!


~T. Eunice



Meeting is an absolutely necessary way to communicate and share information and opinion between company\'s members, but it is also really difficult to manage meeting in an efficient way.

>> A meeting is one of the ways to communicate, share information and opinion between colleagues, but it is really difficult to manage a meeting in an efficient way.

My company is one of a bad case of inefficient meetings ways.

>> My company has an inefficient ways to handle meetings.

I think my company has a meeting at least once a day.

>> Correct

OR

>> We have a daily meeting in our company.

Each meetings goes on at least 1 hours.

>> Each meeting takes at least an hour.
After 2 years working, I realize the reason that my company\'s way to hold meeting is inefficient.

>> After 2 years of working, I realized that the way they hold a meeting is inefficient. 

There\'s a clear point need to be changed.

>> There\'s a clear point that needs to be changed.

First, the purpose and expecting output of the meeting is not clear from the beginning of the meeting to the end of the meeting.

>> First, the purpose and the expected output of the meeting is not clear from the beginning of the meeting until the end.

In order to make meeting efficient, it is the most important point to make all participants know well about the goal of the meeting.

>> In order to make an efficient meeting, the most important point is to make all participants be aware about the goal of the meeting.

If don\'t, the meeting will go to the unanticipated way.

>> If they\'re not, the meeting will be in unexpected way.

What I get to know after 2 year is that the clear, obvious goal is important for organization.

>> I come to realize that the clear and obvious goal are important in an organization.

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