How often should your company hold meetings? Why is it necessary to hold company meetings?

2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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When I used to work at a private educational institute, I had a meeting once a week. The chief director offered us morale to teach and manage students well. And my co-workers and I shared our opinions and thoughts with him and a vice director in a meeting. To run the institute successfully, employers should hold meetings to communicate well with employees. Also two directors used to plant us their business philosophy and a sense of ownership. Additionally it seems that a meeting plays a role of tightening the string of tension for our staff to have a better result of our work.

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The chief director offered us morale to teach and manage students well.

>> The chief director offered us morale on how to teach and manage our students well.

And my co-workers and I shared our opinions and thoughts with him and a vice director in a meeting.

>> My co-workers and I shared our opinions and thoughts with him and his vice director in the meeting.

Also two directors used to plant us their business philosophy and a sense of ownership.

>>Also, two directors used to plan with us their business philosophy and a sense of ownership.

Additionally it seems that a meeting plays a role of tightening the string of tension for our staff to have a better result of our work.

>>Additionally, it seems that a meeting plays a role of tightening the string of tension between staffs to have a better result of our work.

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