How often would you say you get a good night\'s sleep?

2021-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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It depends on occasions but I would say 3~4 times in a week. I have no insomnia or other disease could affect on sleep. I\'m not a type of person who can\'t sleep considering trouble all night long. But i easily affect by environment when I sleep. Such as noise, light and temperature. Especially quietness is most important factor for my good night\'s sleep. Few months ago I heard some lousy footstep noise from upstairs floor in the middle of the night. After many times of unpleasant noise, I made visit to upstairs people but it doesn\'t work out. Since then I had many days of stressful night. For now I\'m dealing okay with this situation. I starting to fight back as making noise to them as same way and trying to ignore them. This battle still going on but now I have less stress than before.

강사 첨삭

Hi again Samuel! 
What I hate the most are inconsiderate neighbors. 
I used to complain about noises. Neighbors should be very careful with noises. 
Good luck^^ 

It depends on occasions, but I would say 3~4 times in a week.
>>> CORRECT! 
I have no insomnia or other disease could affect on sleep.
>>> I have no sleep problems. 
I\'m not a type of person who can\'t sleep considering trouble all night long.
>>> CORRECT! 
But i easily affect by environment when I sleep. 
>>> But I am easily affected by the environment when I sleep.
Such as noise, light and temperature.
>>> CORRECT!
Especially quietness is most important factor for my good night\'s sleep.
>>> In particular, quietness is the most important factor in deep sleep.
Few months ago I heard some lousy footstep noise from upstairs floor in the middle of the night.
>>> A few months ago, I heard lousy footsteps upstairs in the middle of the night.
After many times of unpleasant noise, I made visit to upstairs people but it doesn\'t work out.
>>> After hearing several unpleasant noises, I visited people upstairs, but it didn\'t go well.
Since then I had many days of stressful night. 
>>> CORRECT!
For now I\'m dealing okay with this situation.
>>> CORRECT!
I starting to fight back as making noise to them as same way and trying to ignore them.
>>> I began confronting and trying to ignore them. 
This battle still going on but now I have less stress than before.
>>> CORRECT! 




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