How old were you when you went on your first flight?
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I was 14 years old, when I went on my first flight. My first flight was going to janpan in hukuhoka. It took 1hour from my town in busan to Japan. It means from busan to seoul is farer than from busan to hukuhoka.
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Hello [이름],
Thank you for your homework!
I was 14 years old, when I went on my first flight.
>>> CORRECT
My first flight was going to janpan in hukuhoka.
>>> My first flight was going to Japan in hukuhoka.
It took 1hour from my town in busan to Japan.
>>> It took 1 hour from my town in Busan to Japan.
It means from busan to seoul is farer than from busan to hukuhoka.
>>> It means from Busan to Seoul is farther than from Busan to hukuhoka.
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