How old were you when you went on your first flight?

Hello Christine!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My first flight to abroad was Canada and I was 20 years old. 

>> My first flight to abroad was to Canada when I was 20 years old. 

When I was in teenager, I really liked Hollywood films and pop music. 

>> When I was a teenager, I really liked Hollywood films and pop music. 

That such interests naturally led me into studying hard English language with great pleasure. 

>> Those interests naturally led me into studying the English language hard and with great pleasure. 

The reason why I chose Canada as my first trip was that I really wanted to test my English ability. 

>> CORRECT!

I was eager to go to the US as my virgin trip, however it was very hard for me to get a tourist visa at that time so I had no choice to find other country as alternative.

>> I was eager to go to the US as my virgin trip, however it was very hard for me to get a tourist visa at that time so I had no other choice but to find another country as an alternative.
When I finally arrived at the Vancouver airport, I couldn’t help but more proud myself while I was walking toward to the immigration. 

>> When I finally arrived at the Vancouver airport, I couldn’t help but be more proud of myself while I was walking towards the immigration. 

I still remember that moment crystal clear. 

>> I still remember that moment as clear as crystal. 

\"Wow, I really came here, I am walking the exotic hallway surrounded by all English and even French!\" 

>> I thought to myself, \"Wow! I really came here, I am walking through the exotic hallway surrounded by English-speaking people and even French-speaking people!\" 

Although it was February so Vancouver was raining during most of the time and Toronto was freezing, that couldn\'t stop me to be excited for whole time. 

>> Although it was February, so it was raining in Vancouver most of the time and it was freezing in Toronto, that couldn\'t stop me from feeling excited the whole time. 

Thanks for that experience, I became a positive and confident person.

>> Thanks to that experience, I became a positive and confident person.