How planes fly
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It's amazing to see planes flying. But, how could planes fly? Birds can fly because they are light. But planes are much heavier than birds. The method of flying is in its wings.
If you see its wings, you can see that the top of the wing is curved and the bottom one is smooth. I'll call the top wing 'A' and the bottom wing 'B'. The wind that went through A would have to be much faster than the wind that went through B. If the speed gets faster, the pressure gets weeker. Then, the air in A will be a low pressure and the air in B will be high pressure. The wind goes high pressure to low pressure so the wind will push the plane to the sky.
That's how planes fly. In the future, there might be a place where they sell wings.
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It's amazing to see planes flying. But, how could planes fly? Birds can fly because they are light. But planes are much heavier than birds.
>>CORRECT
>>OR It's amazing to see planes flying but how could they fly? Birds can fly because they are light but planes are much heavier than birds.
The method of flying is in its wings.If you see its wings, you can see that the top of the wing is curved and the bottom one is smooth. I'll call the top wing 'A' and the bottom wing 'B'. The wind that went through A would have to be much faster than the wind that went through B. If the speed gets faster, the pressure gets weeker.
>> CORRECT (just spell the word “weaker” correctly
Then, the air in A will be a low pressure and the air in B will be high pressure.
>> Then, the air in A will be on a low pressure and the air in B will be on a high pressure.
The wind goes high pressure to low pressure so the wind will push the plane to the sky.
>> The wind goes on a high pressure to low pressure so the wind will push the plane to the sky. That's how planes fly. In the future, there might be a place where they sell wings.
>> CORRECT
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