How popular is plastic surgery in your country? What is the most popular feature for cosmetic altera
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I can see someone who is treated plastic surgery commonly when I am taking transportation.
Many woman and girls want to undergo plastic surgery to be beautiful person.
Therefore the standards of beauty are not varied. They want big eyes, a high shape nose, thick lips and white skin like movie star.
Sometimes I wonder I would live a satisfying life if I had a pretty face.
Rather, we need an education that has confidence without comparing it to others.
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>>I can see someone who undergoes plastic surgery normally when I am taking transportation.
Or>>I can see people who have undergone plastic surgery normally when I am taking transportation.
Many woman and girls want to undergo plastic surgery to be beautiful person.
>>Many women and girls want to undergo plastic surgery to be a beautiful person.
Therefore the standards of beauty are not varied.
>>Therefore, the standards of beauty are not varied.
They want big eyes, a high shape nose, thick lips and white skin like movie star.
>>They want big eyes, a high shape nose, thick lips, and white skin like movie stars.
Sometimes I wonder I would live a satisfying life if I had a pretty face.
>>Sometimes, I wonder, I would live a satisfying life if I had a pretty face.
Rather, we need an education that has confidence without comparing it to others.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Rather, we need an education that will teach confidence without comparing oneself to others.
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