How popular is plastic surgery in your country? Why? Explain your answer.

2018-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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In South Korea, plastic surgery is very popular. There are many plastic surgery centers in Korea Through the years, Korea has changed its perspective on plastic surgery. So many people are getting plastic surgery these days. Actually, I don’t have anything against plastic surgery plastic surgery can bring back the confidence. But Now, even the teens who do not need plastic surgery want it Teens should not be allowed to get plastic surgery I think that there should be an age limit for plastic surgery.

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In South Korea, plastic surgery is very popular.

>> CORRECT!

There are many plastic surgery centers in Korea.

>>CORRECT!

OR>> There are many plastic surgery clinics in Korea.

Through the years, Korea has changed its perspective on plastic surgery.

>>CORRECT!

So many people are getting plastic surgery these days.

>>CORRECT!

Actually, I don’t have anything against plastic surgery

>>CORRECT!

plastic surgery can bring back the confidence.

>> Plastic surgery can bring back the confidence of people who have undergone it.

But Now, even the teens who do not need plastic surgery want it.

>> But nowadays, even teens who do not need plastic surgery want it.

Teens should not be allowed to get plastic surgery.

>>CORRECT!

I think that there should be an age limit for plastic surgery.

>>CORRECT!

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