How precious is weekend for me....
학생이 쓴 원문
Weekend is something like air.
It's essential to me . During the weekend i can rest peacefully, do
whatever I want to do , go wherever i want to go .
I can control my condition and If it's not good I can bring it back
to normal. So weekend is air to me . So precious time for me
강사 첨삭
Hi!
You did a good job in writing this. You were able to express how much you love weekends and how precious they are to you. These are my corrections:
T.May
Weekend is something like air.>>The weekend is something like air.It's essential to me .
>>Correct
During the weekend i can rest peacefully, do >> During the weekend, I could rest peacefully. Do whatever I want to do and go wherever I want to go.I can control my condition and If it's not good I can bring it back to normal.>> I can control my condition and if it's not good I can bring it back to normal.
So weekend is air to me .
>> So the weekend is air to me.
So precious time for me
>>It is a precious time for me.
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