How’s it going? Jane,
학생이 쓴 원문
I was little bit busy. I had two presentations.
I’ve stayed up all night since last Sunday. Therefore I couldn’t take a lesson.
Anyway, following is also the continuation of last Friday’s story.
When Sarah and I arrive around a station, we felt hungry. So we bought a sandwich and some drinks. And then we had them sitting on a bench. I forgot again that I had a class.
After all I attended a class even if I listened only 15 minutes. That’s all!
And if it is possible, I would like to show you a manuscript of my presentation. I think it’s simple and short for you to check it. The presentation time is just 1 minute. I’ll be appreciate if you can do that.
See you tomorrow. [이름].
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! You are really diligent! You are so busy yet you made an effort to write this composition for me. You're trying to keep me posted of your activities. Thank you so much!
Jane ^^
I was little busy.
>> I was a little busy.
I had two presentations.
>> correct
I've stayed up all night since last Saturday. Therefore, I couldn't take a lesson.
>> correct
Anyway, following is alsothe continuation of last Friday's story.
>> Anyway, the following is also a continuation of my story last Friday.
When Sarah and I arrive around a station, we felt hungry.
>> When Sarah and I arrived in the station, we felt hungry.
So we bought a sandwich and some drinks. And then we had them sitting on a bench.
>> correct
I forgot again that I had a class.
>> correct
After all I attended a class even if I listened only 15 minutes.
>> I still attended my class even if there were only 15 minutes left for me to listen to the professor.
That's all!
>> correct
And if it is possible, I would like to show you a manuscript of my presentation.
>> correct
I think it's simple and short for you to check it.
>> I think it's simple and short for you to check.
The presentation time is just 1 minute.
>> correct
I'll be appreciate if you can do that.
>> I'll appreciate it if you can do that.
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