How’s it today? Jane,

Do you think that the personality of people can change? Well, I feel like my personality changed The past day, I think I was little bit active person. Now I became passive person. Even if I meet a friend, I don't want to talk much and can't laugh well as I used to. It's not good, isn't it? By the way, when is the election day of the Philippines? I couldn't vote this time, so I didn't care about it. To tell the truth, I didn't know who were candidates. On the Internet news, the ruling party lost this election. It will be hard time as president Lee Myungbak. I'm indifferent to politics but if I consider about situation after study I have to be concerned about it. Anyway, this is today's composition. Have a great weekend.

Hello [이름]!!   The election here was on May 10th. We are just waiting for the announcement of the newly elected government officials..^^ Anyway, I have heard that most Koreans are indifferent when it comes to election. But I think you must participate in it because it will decide the change in your country..^^ You did an excellent job on this composition [이름] and below are my corrections for you… Enjoy your weekend!!   T. Jane   The past day, I think I was little bit active person. >> Before, I think I was little bit of an active person. Now I became passive person >> Now I became a passive person Even if I meet a friend, I don't want to talk much and can't laugh well as I used to >> Even when I meet my friend, I don't want to talk much and I can't laugh like the way I used to To tell the truth, I didn't know who were candidates >> To tell the truth, I didn't know who the candidates were It will be hard time as president Lee Myungbak. >> It will be a hard time for President Lee Myungbak. I'm indifferent to politics but if I consider about situation after study I have to be concerned about it. >> I'm indifferent with politics but if I consider about the situation after studying,  I have to be concern about it.