How\'s the weather today? Is it normal for this time of year?
학생이 쓴 원문
Today morning, there were many smog and a little bit cold outside.
Today\'s temperature is 9 to 18 degrees.
In Korea are getting cold now.
Winter is coming soon.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
Stay warm and safe this cold season. Have a good weekend, too!
~Kelly^^
Today morning, there were many smog and a little bit cold outside.
>>This morning, there was too much smog and it was a bit cold outside.
Today\'s temperature is 9 to 18 degrees.
>> Today\'s temperature ranged from 9 to 18 degrees Celsius.
In Korea are getting cold now.
>> In Korea, it is getting colder now.
Winter is coming soon.
>> Correct
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