How satisfied are you with your current job? Why?
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My job satisfaction rate would be around 80% to 90%. According to many job satisfaction surveys, 1 out of 3 people would like to change their job. However, one of the interesting factors found in the surveys is that their satisfaction rate is quite low while they said it would take a lot to get them to leave their company. It is quite selfish that they expect more from a new employer, although they are not satisfied with their current job. Job satisfaction depends as much on external factors as on personal aspects. Not only your paycheck, but also how other people perceive about your job plays a great role in job satisfaction. Job satisfaction is a personal measure. While any job comes with hassles, perhaps there is enough good to outweigh the bad or maybe the scales have tipped the other way. Sometimes, one particularly bad aspect is enough to drag everything else down. For instance, if you have a conflict with your boss, your high salary won't impact your job satisfaction much.
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Thank you so much for this perfect composition Sir [이름]. ^.^
Job satisfaction is really important.
Like what you said, there are a lot of factors.
Most people nowadays are not happy but they still work because they have to.
We can talk more about this in class.
See you.
Teacher Nina
My job satisfaction rate would be around 80% to 90%.
>> corect
According to many job satisfaction surveys, 1 out of 3 people would like to change their job.
>> corect
However, one of the interesting factors found in the surveys is that their satisfaction rate is quite low while they said it would take a lot to get them to leave their company.
>> corect
It is quite selfish that they expect more from a new employer, although they are not satisfied with their current job.
>> corect
Job satisfaction depends as much on external factors as on personal aspects.
>> corect
Not only your paycheck, but also how other people perceive about your job plays a great role in job satisfaction.
>> corect
Job satisfaction is a personal measure.
>> corect
While any job comes with hassles, perhaps there is enough good to outweigh the bad or maybe the scales have tipped the other way.
>> corect
Sometimes, one particularly bad aspect is enough to drag everything else down.
>> corect
For instance, if you have a conflict with your boss, your high salary won\'t impact your job satisfaction much.
>> corect
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