How serious is the parking problem in your country?
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People have more than one car, and it\'s acceptable if they own a spacious parking lot, but if they end up parking in roadsides then it might be the cause of congestions. In addition to that, it also contributes to worsening the environment because of car emissions. You were great!
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Everywhere in my country have a terrible parking problem.
>>> correct!
>>> OR: There are terrible parking problems anywhere in my country.
Actually, parking problem depends on the region where I live.
>>> Actually, the parking problem depends on the region where I live.
However, we experience same situation , if we go to the mall or downtown in the city regardless where we live.
>>> However, we experience the same situation, if we go to the mall or downtown regardless where we live.
We already have one car in one family and many people in our country have more than one car.
>>> We already have one car in the family, but many people in our country have more than one car.
It is the one of the reason why we have the parking problem.
>>> It is one of the reasons why we have parking problems.
I have seen the parking problem in Rome during my honey, they couldn\'t park their car, if they didn\'t crush another parked car.
>>> I have seen the parking problem in Rome during my honeymoon, they couldn\'t park their cars if they didn\'t crash another parked car.
I was really shocked, when I heard about that.
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The parking problem is not only my country\'s problem, but also whole world\'s problem.
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Driving a car cause fine dust, so our country try to find how to reduce the fine dust in our country.
>>> Driving a car causes fine dust, so our country is trying to find how to reduce fine dust in the environment.
There are a lot of sources that cause fine dust.
>>> correct!
We believe that driving car can be main source of the fine dust.
>>> We believe that driving cars can be the main source of fine dust.
We have been suffering from the fine dust recently.
>>> We have been suffering from fine dust recently.
Everybody would like to escape from the danger of fine dust.
>>> Everybody would like to escape from the dangers of fine dust.
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